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©2009-2010 ~Kissxclickbang
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Model/Styling/Makeup: ~Victoria-Vicious
Photo/Postwork: Me


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:icononlyyouphoto:
Interesting pose! Cool work
:iconkissxclickbang:
thanks :D

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:icongirlsofcinders:
Fantastic shot^^ everything about it is beautiful !

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This is the JOINT account of Britt and Kiara! x3
:iconkissxclickbang:
I'm glad you like it :]

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:iconstrippysocksrock:
you're beautiful image has been featured in my journal [link] ~♥
thanks for sharing ~!

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my new group #Sweet-As-Love a collection of all things sweet ♥
:iconkissxclickbang:
no thank you for featuring it!

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:icongeneric-photographer:
OK so this is me getting around only subscribers being able to receive critiques - which is grossly unfair...

Vision: 4, Originality: 4, Technique: 5 Impact: 5 Deviousness (average): 4.5

My thoughts:

OK, hands down a great shot. I argued with myself myself for a while about whether or not to give you a 5 for Tech, but in the end it was the washed out saturation and the crispness of the shot that swung it for me. My only thought is maybe take some of the empty space off of the top of her head? Up to you though...

I gave you a 4 for Vision because I could get a good grasp of what you might of been aiming for, but it wasn't overly thought provoking. Maybe you could improve this by adding a note in the Artist Comments? Totally optional as it is not essential to a picture that stands alone as much as this does.

You get a flat out five for impact, just because the model and composition is really eye catching. you really capture her pale skin and curves excellently and whilst her face acts as a very expressive focal point, you don't feel locked to them. This allows the viewer to explore the rest of the shot and admire your model.

Good job, :+fav:

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:iconkissxclickbang:
Wow, first of all thank you for taking the time out to write such an extensive critique. I can't say that I disagree with anything you said about the photo, it's a fair and thorough critique. Once again, thank you very much :].

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:icongeneric-photographer:
Your welcome, you asked for a critique after all :p

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:icongoreblowndeer:
srsly more panties :D

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I love Amanda ^^

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